Reflection for atmosphere presentation

By comparing Martin and Dorothy's presentation with my group's, I come to the following remarks.



(Presentation from Martin and Dorothy's group at
http://iln.cite.hku.hk/com/1374/users/wclau/Atomsphere.ppt)


1. In their design, most of the text are hidden under mouseover so that the design would not be overloaded with too many text at the first glance to prevent the audience from reading, but necessary information are still provided according to the audience's instruction.

2. They remind me to include 'diagram not to scale' which my group have missed.

3. They used the 'bottom to top' format while my group used the 'right bottom corner to left upper corner' format. As a result, they have more space to present more detailed information than us, e.g. the reflection of heat in the troposphere.

By looking at some of the classmates' design, what I can do to improve in this task is that buttons and animations can be used to bring more fun to the presentations and make the display look more attractive. More importantly, the use of buttons enhances readers to choose and explore at their will in whatever sequence. The messages are shown when clicked on the buttons to help readers to direct from they are looking to focus to the text. As a result, the messages can be easily be addressed to the readers.